In the last line of the paragraph, replace the text after "certifying bodies" with the following: that have either been accredited by an IAF accreditation body to, or could demonstrate compliance to, ISO 17021 or ISO/IEC Guide 65, and, when subsequently available, ISO/IEC 17065.

Replace the first sentence with the following:Establish covenants, conditions, and restrictions (CC&R) or other forms of deed restrictions which state that the growing of produce is not prohibited in project areas, including greenhouses, any portion of residential front, rear, or side yards; or balconies, patios, or rooftops.

In the first sentence, remove the word "paseo"

Replace the image with the following:

In the paragraph, replace the last sentence with "Combinations of SRI-compliant and vegetated roofs can be used provided they satisfy the equation in Option 3."

In the first row, replace "Products of Combustion" with "Equipment Types"

In the first row, replace "Products of Combustion" with "Equipment Types"

Under Option 1, each bullet should be renamed as Path 1 and Path 2, respectively.

For Path 1, change both instances of "person" to "capita"

Delete: Minimum area of green space must be no less than 7212 square feet (670 square meters).

In Item 4, remove "storage capacity of the site" and replace "conditions" with "health"