What should the plan for corrective action contain?

This part of the M&V Plan can't be very detailed since you do not yet know what needs to be done. What you will do depends upon the issues uncovered. In general the action plan simply identifies what you will do when deviations occur between the projected savings and the actual savings. Typically this involves identifying additional energy saving strategies in the facility and using the calibrated model, for example, to determine additional energy savings. The cost and savings of the additional energy saving measures should be summarized in the final M&V report.

We’d like to wait to pursue the option for off-site renewable energy until after the results of the preliminary review. Is it ok to pursue this credit after the preliminary review is complete or as an appeal should we need additional points?

In general, you can submit new credits after the preliminary review or at the appeal stage (or increase the achievement threshold of previously pursued credits) as long as you remain in compliance with performance period rules. Because there are no environmental implications to buying offsets for the performance period after the performance period, it's allowed for this credit.