Not sure these measures are enough to prevent the birds collision
Yes but Threat Factor seems to be the only industry accepted metric for building facades. Gonig to piggy back your post to include my thoughts for improvement:
This credit will need clarity on the dimensions from the building corner that consitutes a glazed corner and fly through conditions. I've seen some municipalties define glazed corners as glass within 10-12' from the corner in both directions. I dont see any accepted max width for a flythrough but the dimensions seems to be around 15-17 ft based on a review of municipal guidelines.