Revise Figure 1:
In the key, replace "Building footprint (non-vegetated roof), to be excluded from calculations" with “Building footprint (non-vegetated roof), not restored with native or adapted species”

In the key, replace "Non-vegetated, pedestrian oriented hardscape & non-native vegetation areas, to be excluded from calculations” with “Non-vegetated, pedestrian oriented hardscape, not restored with native or adapted species”

Change the definition of 'mounting height' to read:
“mounting height the distance between ground level (or the workplane) and the center of the luminaire (light fixture); the height at which a luminaire is installed.”

Replace Figures 4 and 5 with a combined graphic to be located in the “Vertical Illuminance” section. The new graphic shows the vertical calculation grid, the height above the highest luminaire, and the lighting boundary. Renumber Figures 6 and 7 to be Figures 5 and 6.

Figure 6.
Change the arc to a rectangle to accurately show a vertical illuminance grid.

Revise Figure 3. as follows:
Add more calculation points. Show points spaced 5’x5’ (1.5m x 1.5m) over the entire site. Add identifying call outs to the light fixtures. Label the orientation of the fixtures.

In the last paragraph, make two edits:
1. In the 4th sentence, replace "graded land" with "manicured landscaping"
2. After the 4th sentence, add this new sentence: "Land that has only been cleared or graded, with no additional improvements, is not considered previously developed."

To the last bullet point, add a sentence clarifying how to calculate the G rating for building-mounted luminaires:
"For the glare rating, determine the lowest rating where the lumens for all of the secondary solid angles do not exceed the threshold lumens from IES TM-15-11, Addendum A, Table A-3. For building-mounted luminaires only, the BVH and BH zonal lumens do not need to be considered in determining the G rating."

Last bullet under "The improvement plan must address the following topics." should read:
"•Soils. Documentation of general soil structure, preservation of healthy soils, remediation of compacted soils, identification of previously disturbed area."

Delete "previously developed" and its definition.

Add the term "previously disturbed":
"previously disturbed areas that have been graded, compacted, cleared, previously developed, or disturbed in any way. These are areas that do not qualify as 'greenfield.'"

Option 1. On-Site Restoration. The first sentence should read:
"Using native or adapted vegetation, restore 30% (including the building footprint) of all portions of the site identified as previously disturbed."