Can we collect anonymous survey responses but still incentivize individuals to respond by offering a prize?

Yes, offering a prize to increase your survey response rate is acceptable, and even encouraged. Just be sure that names aren’t attached to responses. This credit requires that you collect anonymous responses so that occupants feel comfortable responding truthfully.

What type of measurement instrument do we need to use to monitor radiant temperature in occupied spaces?

ASHRAE-55 does not require a specific device, but requires you to measure mean radiant temperature (MRT). Measurements from both black globe thermometers and infrared thermometers can be used to calculate MRT. See ASHRAE Fundamentals 2005 for additional details on calculations.

The LEED Reference Guide states that we need to have at least one temperature sensor in each HVAC zone. What defines an HVAC zone for this credit?

An HVAC zone is a group of spaces or a single space with individual temperature control from a shared HVAC system. So, in order to meet the credit requirements you need to have at least one temperature sensor for each zone with individual control. Note that when pursuing this credit, be sure to also delineate between HVAC zones that contain both perimeter and core spaces, zones that have perimeter areas with different orientations, or zones that have substantially different usage types may require additional temperature sensors.

What should the plan for corrective action contain?

This part of the M&V Plan can't be very detailed since you do not yet know what needs to be done. What you will do depends upon the issues uncovered. In general the action plan simply identifies what you will do when deviations occur between the projected savings and the actual savings. Typically this involves identifying additional energy saving strategies in the facility and using the calibrated model, for example, to determine additional energy savings. The cost and savings of the additional energy saving measures should be summarized in the final M&V report.